VaguelyCreepy's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Pinkie plus Monster]

It appears a particularly foul type of barnacle has decided to latch on to you in the guise of a user. I recommend ignoring it - hopefully the wretched thing will die of neglect and fall off.

As far as the comic goes, not quite a laugh-out-loud joke, but I still found it amusing. For a second there I thought her heart had exploded or something. I notice that the shading on the characters is kind of inconsistent, in terms of light source. Like in panel 8, Pinkie's shaded like the light is coming from above, but Twilight is shaded like it's coming from the side. Also, I like Twilight's pouty face in the last panel. Really, all of their expressions are pretty good.

Try not to let cruel people get to you. I don't know if you watch Toonami, but take some advice from T.O.M.: Listen to your critics, but ALWAYS ignore the haters.

TheBurningDonut responds:

Yeah Ive seen that guy before, I looked at his gallery and it seems the only way he can get attention is by pissing people off.

I just can't help but feel sorry for the guy!

And I appreciate good constructive criticism, like the kind you give.

[Secret Agent Moustache]

He looks a *lot* like Generator Rex.

This is a good thing.

By way of improvement, I'd suggest tightening up some of the lines on the face and clothes, and adding a bit more depth to the clothes. Overall, it's still good.

TaraGraphika responds:

I love your Journal posts. The recent one, and the previous. You came out with a highly stable statement in the area of deep internet realization. Probably because you've been experiencing, or observing the behavior of people in the internet by making a lot of research and common sense. People might think it is common knowledge and these explanation shouldn't even need to be clarify, but I supposed that I've been loving your writing assets in both humorous and informative essays. Perhaps, one day, I would like to hire you as a writer:)

[Alicorn Symbol]

I like it. Simple, clean, and clear. Icons work best when they are recognizable and convey their meaning easily. I also like how you made the entire thing from one line. Good job!

[Kidnapping Time]

Inspired by the review below me:

Kidnapping Time,
Come on, grab a youth.
Slay witnesses and snooping sleuths.
With Jake the Pedo and Finn the Slender
Hide the horrific truth, it's Kidnapping Time!

Heh. I like this. I normally DON'T like Pedobear, but this tickles the strange part in my brain that makes me not care what I like. It's JUST twisted enough to be really funny. I think you did a really good job mimicking the show's style, although, as someone already said, their arms are a bit more noodley than what you have here. Also, the hand with the lollipop is a nice touch. Good job!

[MLP:Soft Breeze]

First and foremost, this deserves a better score than it currently has, so don't let that get under your skin.

Her name seems fitting, as she looks very fluffy. The detail, pose and expression are all well-done. It lacks anything really amazing to push it up to a five-star rating, but it's good, solid work, and I'd be interested in hearing more about this character.

[Fluttershy]

As painfully adorable as she ever is. Some of the ways you worked in the heart shapes are pretty interesting. I'm wondering why the cloud in the upper left corner either stops at or can't be seen through the wing, but the one in the upper right corner doesn't stop or can be seen.

HassySoda responds:

Can't tell if you're trying to be condescending or you legitimately thought I did it that way on purpose. To answer your question, I fucked up.

[Cold War Pact]

I like Gravity Falls, and this style kind of looks like EarthBound, which is my favorite game ever, so this gets approval on all fronts. Detail and execution are all great, but it feels like it needs just a few lines of background detail to be really complete.

[Luck]

Kind of reminds me of Yoshi's Island. The petals/hearts give a strong impression of a tropical breeze as the figure runs along.

Although, come to think of it, I agree with the person below me, at least partially - this one's pretty good as is, but I WOULD like to see a grand, sweeping landscape in your style.

[.:A-Vandetta:.]

Is Banette going to have to smack a bitch?

Banette's one of my favorite ghosts too. Not just the look, but the whole "possessed revenge doll" thing too. I like this, and I don't think the tail outline is a problem - it fits with the overall, slightly sketchy feel.

[Circles]

You are officially the first user I'm follwing for their art. Something about your lineless style, your lighting, and your surreal characters and subject matter all really grab me. The fact that you made a piece based on that particular song is a bonus. I look forward to whatever you come up with next.

Is there some sort of story or mythology behind your characters, or are they just ones you like to use?

Shane-Frost responds:

I'm quite honored I have to say. Thank you very much! There is something behind each and every work, the charecters and the idea's. It's more so that they will eventually come but remain within the boundries they are given currently. It's based on anyone's curiosity how much any of it is revealed.